SIlfeeEARStep2

For the second genre I think that a letter addressed to the faculty of high schools from Bloomsburg would be a good pick for this step of the EAR project. My version of this letter will be about accounting and spreading the word to high school students about what this field has to offer. I think this will be a good way to get the word about accounting out to high schools so that students have the idea in their head about it and maybe even try it in high school so that they can decide if they enjoy it before they come to college.

Example 1: I like this example because at first sight it looks very professional and organized which is how a letter to faculty should be. I also think that the alignment is good for the most part. However, I don't like that there's sore of like a side bar going down the side of the letter because it makes the alignment look a little off.

Example 2: I chose this example because I liked that it's short and straight to the point. Sometimes, letters need a lot of detail, but not always. I also liked the way the names of the people who are sending the letter are aligned at the bottom of the letter.

Example 3: This example was good in my opinion because the alignment makes it look nice and I feel like its spaced out nicely as well. By this I mean that the author of this letter grouped things nicely and separated the information in their paragraphs well.

I want my example to be very neat and professional looking at first sight. I also want to make sure all of my information is placed with other information that will highlight it. Finally, I want to make sue that my letter only has information in it that is necessary to get my point across so I don't lose anyone's attention.