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I liked this letter because it gets right to the point and does not beat around the bush with any other information that has nothing to do with what is going on. I also feel that this letter gives off a very formal look Which shows that this letter has very important information in it. I also can see that the alignment of this letter is perfect having all the diffrent parts of the letter lined up in perfect position with each other.



I like this letter because it is a very well written acceptance letter from a very good university. This is a letter that every college student can relate to because every student has recieved a letter like this from atleast one university. That fact makes it even more intriguing because each student from bloomsburg has recieved an acceptance letter like this one saying that they have been accepted and that bloomsburg would welcome them for the next four years of education.

I found this letter to be interesting because it is from the president and he is saying how he is inspired by the ideas of young amerians.I liked how the letter started with thanking the young americans then went on to what the president had to say. This would be a good example of a letter that a person high up in a company would send to their employees giving them thanks then stating what he is going to do. This is a good example of a formal letter that has great alignment and gets right to the point.

For my letter I would like to send a letter home to all incoming freshman who are going to become a student athlete. This letter will include all the advantages of being a student athlete. This will include having teammates that help not only help on the field but also with school work. Also coaches and faculty that have the players best intrest in mind and that will do help in anyway they can to make sure the athlete is on the right track. I will also state that Physical activity is known to help lower stress and that the demanding schedule of athletes helps them to be more disciplined which will help them get everything they need to done.