BlakeRevisionSheetTell

(what you wrote) || Revision (how it changed after feedback) || Explanation/Rule (catchy way to remember next time) ||
 * Lit & Soc – Writer’s Revision Sheet **
 * Original
 * turly || truly || Spelling ||
 * we stopped hanging out and talking to her || we stopped hanging out and didn't talk to her || flows more and keeps the writing in past tense ||
 *  and push all our judgments away for now || and push away all the judgments we had || keep writing in past tense ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Cambria; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">The Journey Of Education || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Cambria; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Teaching is a Selfless Act || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Cambria; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I changed the title to fit in a theme throughout the project ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Cambria; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">no heading || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Cambria; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">headings || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Cambria; font-size: 16px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I added headings to the sections of my paper to, again, create a common theme ||